IELTS Writing task 2 – 27/8/2016:With the rapid advancement of communication technology

Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 27/08/2016

With the rapid advancement of communication technology:smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Model Answer

1/

It is true that cell phones and computers play crucial roles in our lives. Some people claim that this is the reason for declining communication skills. While I accept that modern technologies make our lives more convenient, I believe that they have some negative effects on our communication ability.

On the one hand, there are several advantages of using these electronic devices. The biggest advantage is that cell phones and computers allow people to communicate with each other more quickly and conveniently. For example, thanks to the Internet, managers can utilize computers to contact their partners from other countries. As a result, they can save more time and money to do other vital workof their business. Furthermore, many mobile phones and computers now have Skype and therefore we can talk to friends and family who are far away.  We can actually see them, whereas before we had to rely on expensive long-distance calls or letters which took ages to arrive.

On the other hand, this trend may have some drawbacks. Firstly, although people can make many new friends via the Internet easily, they rarely meet and talk directly with each other. This will let people be under illusions about their acquaintances in the virtual world. Secondly, because of extreme focusing on cell phones or computers, people no longer want to spend time with their true friends and their families. My close friend, for instance, is so addicted to chatting and playing games on her smart phone that she ignores everyone when we gather and talk about funny stories together.

In conclusion, although modern technologies bring us numerous benefits, it is true that the communication ability of people will be improved if they restrict their usage of mobile phones and computers.

2/

The way that people communicate has changed significantly since the development of high-tech devices like smartphones, iPads or other tablets. Although there are undeniable drawbacks, I believe that these modern technologies can bring a lot of benefits to humans in various areas.

On the one hand, there are several shortcomings of the widespread utilization of advanced communication tools. The obvious disadvantage of using smart devices in communicating is that people tend to use it too much and forget about real conversations, talking to each other face to face. For example, these days, it is common to see a group of friends hanging out or having drinks in silence because each person is using their phones, surfing Facebook or chatting by messenger apps. The atmosphere is not as warm as when people concentrate on the conversation and put aside any electronic gadgets. Another drawback is that the battery of smart devices is usually weak so when it dies, the owners often lost communication until they meet a power source and get their devices recharged.

On the other hand, this trend may have more advantages. I think that people gain more than lost from using smart devices because it is more convenient to get in touch and costs us less money. Firstly, by taking the advantage of the smart devices, anyone can easily communicate with others wherever they are in the world as long as there is an internet connection. For example, parents can talk to their child who is studying abroad and even see each other thanks to Facetime or similar video call apps. Secondly, using apps on smart devices to communicate through the internet is cheaper than calling using the old mobile connections hence saves us money.

In conclusion, I would argue that there are more benefits than drawbacks that smart devices bring us in communication.

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